By poker_boy | 4 Comments
Last updated: Wednesday, June 23, 2010 | 73 Views Tags: fun game, gf, jokers, playing poker, poem, poker face, pot, strip poker, underwear
What’s this week’s poker question? Let’s dive straight in…
Question: I was playing poker, its a fun game
winning a match is never really lame,
winning a match is never really lame,
decided to play some strip poker,
lost with a pair of jokers,
tossed my underwear into the pot,
an expensive pair that my gf bought.
I try to explain myself that its cold in the den
Why did I play this game with a bunch of men.
Answer: Very amusing, you have quite the gift with words! The only thing I will say is that line 2 sounds a bit forced so maybe you would consider changing that, I like the concept of it as this probably gets seldom covered in a poem.
For giving me something to laugh about that wasn’t a box set of The Vicar of Dibley or my reflection in the mirror I give you 8/10
EDIT-Why should a poem not be simple, sometimes simplicity is best, have you never hears of the phrase less is more?
Comments
4 comments
Mike Smith
June 23, 2010
Amusing but its simple and not very thoughtful.
June 23, 2010
I can see how this could evolve to Texas Hold ‘Em.
But that description would get you booted from Y!A
hahah
June 23, 2010
I am asking you the same question?
… Now if I played with a bunch of men
it might be different
I would suggest you think about playing
with us girls next time.
June 23, 2010
Luckily your almonds were,
well… almonds,
or you’d have had a bit of trouble
explaining to the men
‘how hot’ that den was.
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